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This is great

This was really very sad to read.. Bt truly it was superb ...O:-)

So sad a poem, dear! Good trees are cut down first...likewise, ur uncle...m sorry...
Well penned!
5/5

Sweetie that is a sad but amazing poem. I dont know how you can say you want to write more like me. This is exactly something I would write. So much feeling. So sad but beautiful.

Wow. this is very powerful. I love it . very good imagery I felt like I was there lol . Very deep. you described your feelings perfectly.

Acutally could this be called a prose poem? Really you are talented dont deny yourself that!

This is amazing, reading it made me sad, but it was so beautifully written. There was so much emotion and it was very descriptive, made me feel like they were my emotions.

Well manuscripted...good one.

Awwww..this made me tear up...great write:)

So sorrowful but so powerful. The imaging is amazing and I feel though I were there. Keep penning

Wow, this poem is beyond anything I have ever read. it really hit hard for me. It is just so amazing to read and I could not stop!

I can understand your pain. Be strong, THIS TOO WILL PASS.
You are a perfect poet. you have a genuine talent. I liked the whole poem specially a line, "Like only beauty is from a flower what you notice."

Wow!!! amazing by far your best... 10000/10000

This poem is amazing and I can really relate to it. I lost my great uncle a couple years ago because he had a stroke, so now every year on the forth of July my family gets togeather to remember him. But it just goes to show you that life goes on and time helps heal some things like this.

I wish you a happy life you are really talentented keep it up

yours,Ayesha

Wow. This is such a chilling, painful piece. My condolences. Beautiful write though.

Well written sweetheart

Well written sweetheart

A master-piece !