Very beautifully written. 5/5

Very emotional. Powerful, filled with the pain you felt. Very, very, very good. It has all the elements a poem should. But there are few spelling errors, and I would not point them out but this poem is so good and if you fix a few errors it would be perfect! 5/5

A-mazing!!! Superb flow.

This is what is called Sadpoem... Great writings.. 5/5