Oh... this poem has so much of depth... The imagery is sad... the sense of the burning of your flesh to ease your pain... this thought is so satisfying when.you have gone through harsh times...
Good piece
keep writing:)

I like the fact this piece is so simple and so short yet it says so much. I think it is a wonderful way to vent out or simply release unused words in a way like this. Granted the imagery is quite heartrending, it is still a nice piece.

Keep writing and I will keep reading,
with much love,
His Butterfly Princess

Short but extremely powerful, I rally enjoyed reading it, I could read this over and over again all night long, great work

I love simple pieces like this. Well written.