by yasha Nov 30, 2012
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
In life there are always gonna be questions, without any directions, but dont fall into the deception, or belive the perception, if anything its those wrong people that give your mind those erections, and sometimes gives your heart the wrong side of affection. |
Great rhyming here, really good in my opinion. The whole idea of your poem sounds interesting and kept me reading so that means its a good one, for me that is. All in all, great job. |
by yasha
Its been a while since I been on here but thanx for the comment much appreciated |