Wow looooove this poem. Everything about it^_^
Great job=)

I'm going to try this form:)

Great form use Andrea, as always.
i love the message in this, the serenity and gentleness.
Such a deepness in the lines.

love ya
Xxx

Interesting piece,

A couple walking along the train trails while holding hands and the moon guiding them.

Romantic scene. Though, I can't help but feel disquieted by it because the couple is walking along the tracks of the train. It indicates danger at least to me.