Comments : Dead sleep

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such dread, such sadness!
    Just reading this turns the soul gray!
    I like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    The word is 'macabre". i feel there's an attraction,in the poem,to things ghoulish like the darkness that is welcome by ghosts.dont you dare hurt yourself or im going to be cross with you.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really liked this poem, it had sooo much meaning and pull to the reader!