Depression

This is beautiful. I love that that the speaker feels at fault, because they can't change anything. It's the feeling of helplessness.
Great!

A brief moment of doubt, crystal clear in Senryu. This is what I like.

Oh this spoke to me so much! How much we can get into this depression through someone else not talking to us. We begint o wonder why they dont talk and what wqe might have done to them. The depression feels so strong because we do not know what to do to fix it.

Loved this!!

So much truth and reality expressed in only 10 words...very strong, even in brevity.

Wow short but very beautiful you can feel the emotions in this piece! :) i really loved the last line EVERYONE old or young ALWAYS thinks this in one point of their lives!! i really do love the way this was written nicely done my dear! :) 5/5

Queen Ash