You have the ability to take your sadness, dip it into small poems, and touch the hearts of many... This write is simplistic in message and powerful in all emotions possible... Touching piece Khalid..~

Agree with MT, you speak volumes with your small pieces.... thoughtful one:)
Excellent piece(:

Thanks sweets!!
I think I'll change the poem to read as follows:
Feeling so happy
for my dearest are talking
I'm not forgotten

Feeling so happy
for my dearest are talking
I'm not forgotten
amazing! how can you change like this?
i like it

NICE POEM

This is a very neat poem, its short but full of meaning. When you and the person you care about fail to communicate it can be devastating leaving you with feelings of abandonment.

Wow short but very beautiful you can feel the emotions in this piece! :) i really loved the last line EVERYONE old or young ALWAYS thinks this in one point of their lives!! i really do love the way this was written nicely done my dear! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

So much truth and reality expressed in only 10 words...very strong, even in brevity.

Oh this spoke to me so much! How much we can get into this depression through someone else not talking to us. We begint o wonder why they dont talk and what wqe might have done to them. The depression feels so strong because we do not know what to do to fix it.

Loved this!!

A brief moment of doubt, crystal clear in Senryu. This is what I like.

This is beautiful. I love that that the speaker feels at fault, because they can't change anything. It's the feeling of helplessness.
Great!