Petal Dancing

by Maple Tree   Dec 2, 2012


The spirit of angels
grace the heavens
of a whirlwind sonnet,
crafted in detailed form,
she's a kindred flame,
happiness rains joy
upon an endless smile

for her....

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I love the title,

    and also I like how this piece made me picture someone smiling while dancing with the petals that are falling. When I picture petals dancing, I think about petals falling, so the ending also made me smile. It create a happy image in my mind.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Tssk tskk...you make me smile...I find such simple words to be the most rewarding sometimes and I always feel that way when I read your writes like this...Loved everything about this...personifying a sonnet, just perfect :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is so gentle, so calming to read, in it's shortness it packs a punch of relaxation, lovely piece to read after a long day.

    Beautiful

    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is amazing.. . I love the thoughtfulness and the message you share... Thanks for sharing this....
    Keep writing(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    A short, meaningful and heart-taking piece!
    When a poem is related to angels' spirit it means the author is dealing with innocence, since angel's no sins. I like such types of high-order emotional poems. This really extends my feeings.
    I love your work and thoughts.