by Khalid M Darwish Dec 2, 2012
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Angel's innocence - |
by Skyler
This tells me that friendship can be pure and without eroticism, like a childhood friend. Very nice. |
by Baby Rainbow
Been a whikle since I checked out your work, I love this little poem. Very sweet and angelic with a soothing tone through out. |
5/5! I think the concept you were writing on here might have done well to be embellished (like in a chain haiku) because its so beautiful, I just want to read more! |
by Autuumnbree
Interesting and thought provoking write, angels are fascinating creatures but not all angels are good. I like that your poems are short but very interesting. |
by Adelle
Your poems are very thought provoking, another piece that I really enjoyed. Coming from a religious context I understood this poem in a specific way that may not be its original intention if however it is then I love how you have contrasted light and dark. |