Aww nice :) I like how you started this poem with "angel's innocence" it was intriguing and made me wonder what this poem would be about.

"You aren't polluted with sins"
^^ I love your use of words here... 'polluted' was a well-chosen word here.

The ending was hopeful... and made me wonder what inspired this poem.

Great job with this poem :)

The only critique I have, if this is a haiku, the second line has 8 syllables.

Pure and peaceful... As always sir, you picture loads of emotions through your forms..
Keep writing:)

Your poems are very thought provoking, another piece that I really enjoyed. Coming from a religious context I understood this poem in a specific way that may not be its original intention if however it is then I love how you have contrasted light and dark.

Interesting and thought provoking write, angels are fascinating creatures but not all angels are good. I like that your poems are short but very interesting.

5/5! I think the concept you were writing on here might have done well to be embellished (like in a chain haiku) because its so beautiful, I just want to read more!

I love your work!

Been a whikle since I checked out your work, I love this little poem. Very sweet and angelic with a soothing tone through out.

This tells me that friendship can be pure and without eroticism, like a childhood friend. Very nice.