That is so sad! I feel your throbbing pain. I'm going through the same thing, just to figure out WHAT HAPPENED!
I love this poem!!!!

How true, how honest!?!
I've noticed some spelling errors (typos) in these lines: "His eyes dont (don't) have the same shine, now theyre (they're) just dull and heartless.." and "...shoulder, treat you
like your (you're) worthless."
But over all, good job!

Love is sacrifice of relief. A good friend, will always remain.