Sweetie in the second line it should be "You lied" third line it should be "you're" in the fourth line it should be (in my opinion) "There was a pair of broken eyes that saw through your many lies" fifth line should be "go into the light" sorry sweeite within that aame line i don't know what to tell you... "But she doesnt' know how we feel and That we have a Heart of Steel" should be seperate but other than that my dear this poem is FILLED with emoitions and again it should be under "dark" sweetie 5/5

Queen Ash

I didnt really think this one was dark. but honestly i didnt know what to do with it.