Holy water(Haiku)

I love this poem. There seems to be always something magical about a rainbow or at least thats how I see it. 5

I love poems about rain. The visual of the rainbow And glittery silver were just wonderful

Love the rain. Love this. Seven colors shine is more to me like a rainbow shining after the rain... Or during it, sometimes. Not sure if that's what you meant anyway, but rainbows generally have 7 colors..
Anyway, lovely haiku. Means different things to different people and that's always good. :)

-Liz

I see you took the word the out like I suggested but now that line has a syllable count of 6 instead of 7 which is why I also suggested you change the word glitter to glittery.

I see you took the word the out like I suggested but now that line has a syllable count of 6 instead of 7 which is why I also suggested you change the word glitter to glittery.