Eintou winking [Eintou]

Ah Khalid, this is great! The form is really cool too, it's always nice to see different forms being used it adds an interesting twist to any poem.

Forgetting about removing teeth.. stinking hehe
and writing and reading poems about body shrinking.

^ those are the lines that caught my attention.

I have the tendency of counting syllables instead of words, and that's what I did with this piece, and I was puzzled until I realized that it was words. lol

Well done, This is a fun piece, I enjoyed it.