Forgetting about removing teeth.. stinking hehe
and writing and reading poems about body shrinking.

^ those are the lines that caught my attention.

I have the tendency of counting syllables instead of words, and that's what I did with this piece, and I was puzzled until I realized that it was words. lol

Well done, This is a fun piece, I enjoyed it.

Ah Khalid, this is great! The form is really cool too, it's always nice to see different forms being used it adds an interesting twist to any poem.