Menage a Trois (double senryu)

by Chelsey   Dec 5, 2012


Me, myself, and I
foreplay inside tangled thoughts
of disarrayment.

All three heavily
panting from the arousal
of total chaos.

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Lol, I am not sure how to interprete this...

    I have no idea how I feel about this piece... Kind of weird. I mean that I have no idea how I feel not the piece.

    Though, I do like the way it's written and the way it sounds when I read it. The title caught my attention and the beginning just enhanced it it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Ughh Phones! and double posts

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow!

    Speechless. The shortness yet perfection is gobsmacking

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I did not know whether to giggle or sigh about this. Your words pull me close, but leave me dangling, wondering how to actually feel about this. Although I am uncertain I really like the way it made me feel.
    Adore you Chels.

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Now this was quite clever... love it Chelz

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