Comments : Menage a Trois (double senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Do you have a special blanket too? giggles ;p

    Now this was creative... You took the metaphor and enhanced it, matched it with your confusion and feelings, and came up with this brilliant double senryu... love it!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Oooooh this made me thinks of alysia's line in cabrides and the morning after when she goes like

    "I don't want God to smell another man on me,confusing menage a trois for the trinity"

    aside from it making me think of alysia,

    this was lovely Chelsey! me Gusta...

    specially the tone in which I read
    "me , myself and I"

    i wanted to snap my fingers..holla at me

    xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Me myself and I, and Yaki

    *snaps*

    Menage a Four

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I agree this is creative, those few words, held something huge.
    Love it, perfectly written^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very clever Chels. xx

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is quite unique Chels,
    Seem like you have found your self the last few
    Months :)

    Well penned :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    O.m.g

    i am in love with this! you are always so creative, share some of that with me! lol

    just perfect all the way around, added to my favorites so i can envy it every single day of my life. haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Now this was quite clever... love it Chelz

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I did not know whether to giggle or sigh about this. Your words pull me close, but leave me dangling, wondering how to actually feel about this. Although I am uncertain I really like the way it made me feel.
    Adore you Chels.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow!

    Speechless. The shortness yet perfection is gobsmacking

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Ughh Phones! and double posts

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Lol, I am not sure how to interprete this...

    I have no idea how I feel about this piece... Kind of weird. I mean that I have no idea how I feel not the piece.

    Though, I do like the way it's written and the way it sounds when I read it. The title caught my attention and the beginning just enhanced it it.