Comments : True Friends

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Awesome write Ornella! I loved it and I do relate to it. It's very sorrowful your best friend is leaving.
    My only point is the last line "Although she running way with that man Ken" if I'm not mistaken, should read "Although she's running away with that man Ken"
    Nice work.

    • 11 years ago

      by ornella

      THANKS GIRL AM HAPPY U LIKE IT BUT QUESTION HOW DO YOU EDIT THE POEM?

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Ornella press the "Your poem" on the right of the screen where you get a list of all your poems. There you click on edit of this poem. Good luck.

    • 11 years ago

      by ornella

      THANKS I THINK I FIGURED IT OUT THOUGH