Snow evening(Haiku)

Grasses filled with white
the first step of purple dove
like a ten month child

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11 years ago
by Marcy Lewis

Sorry, double post!
11 years ago
by Marcy Lewis

This was such a light poem. I love this. The attitude of it, made me feel like the words were floating as I read them. Wonderful.
12 years ago
by Amreen

This is a lovely piece. You picture the snowy evening well through your descriptions.
Good piece(:
12 years ago
by Wild flower

This is a well written haiku:)
Good job.
12 years ago
by mandy

This was bright and beautiful, 5/5.
I love the unique description, when we write how we feel the truth is often revealed.