by ornella Dec 6, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Just another victim that is what I am |
I loved the title that referred to the fact that you're not only his 1st victim but rather added to who's prior to you. Now the poem: Regarding the 3rd and 4th lines, the 3rd has the expression "it is my fault" but since you ended the line with "?" mark the expression should be "is it my fault". The 4th line should end with "?" since it's a question. |