by ornella Dec 6, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The moment I tried to forget |
by Amreen
Oh so emotional.. This is beautiful but I suggest you to capitalize only first word of a sentence. And overall this piece shows good talent. |
Ornella you really have a magic touch in writing poems. I really encourage you pen a lot. This is an example of you unique print. I loved it. Just remove the puntuation at the end of each line. |