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by yogi73
Ode to the Moon! This is really nice. Good flow and I like the emotion. Some minor gramatical things: My garden of flowers "seizes" to bloom - should be "ceases" And everyday, I seek "thou" divine light for embrace - I think "thine" or "thy" would be more appropriate. otherwise well done!
by Joarz
Thank you Yogi73. Most appreciated. I already rectified the words you pointed out. Thank you.