This was awesome I loved how you took this challenge
You nailed it :)

You've made that snow globe come to life with this write... I always wondered what it'd be like inside one of those... this is beautiful!! Well done!!

You rocked it Saffie!! Nice word choice and flow.

This is so fascinating and a very unique challenge. Props to him for coming up with it and big props to you for succeeding beautifully with it. :D

It has perfect word choice, keeps you interested throughout the whole piece... I love it and will be adding to my favorites. :)