Ashes

Personally i like the simplicity of this poem. It shows that through everything you persist and continue to worry about htose you love... Worrying about everything

Now how it ends in silence scares me, Think about it... It ends it silence usually means something permanent has happened like death or something else like that. Yeesh, and you say you dont write very emotional writes. How did I inspire you at all *shakes my head*

This also reminds me of when my friend attempted something and i worried about her all day long... Forever and ever and ever...
Its what people do, and trust me its more then just girls i know plenty of guys that worry.

Females express it better though >.> Hands down.

Thank you!

Edit: Just noticed the title. Ashes really does remind me of death... <3 Maybe someone was in trouble?

I hope you don't mind but I nominated this for this week's poetry contest, wonderful poem, fantastic job

Andrea, still you write and still you be strong...you are wise one with so much to give, such is the emotion in this piece you express simply yet with great courage.

Love always, You are that marigold who'll keep on coming back and standing tall in the breeze of life

xx

You have just reminded me of why I hate being a woman...emotional little worrier I am...ugh

Agree with Hellon, the use of marigold is just beautiful!!

sigh*...cant even comment, to relatable to break a part and try and see your side and analyze it. I read, I comprehend, I feel the same way...
loveeeelyyy

And each day you make some people grow stronger and stronger:)
I hate worrying, but thats part of our lives isnt it? Dont worry a lot<--- I'll keep saying that until you dont, even if it took me forever.
You poured lots of emotions in this piece, great job:)