And each day it makes you stronger and stronger!

This poem is deep with your emotion and how lonely it can be for you and hopeless it seems some nights, It is also good to see you express some of this.

The shape is interesting and eye catching as well as your choice of title Maple.

Keep writing xx

I love the use of the marigold in this piece because they are such a resilient little flower and I think you have captured the similarity of this with a woman and how much we accept and tolerate in our daily life.

Worry is something we tend to suck up and get on with...we try our best to hide it from others but....when we are alone it can be like living in a nightmare.

You have done a great job in expressing yourself in this short verse. Very enjoyable read.

And each day you make some people grow stronger and stronger:)
I hate worrying, but thats part of our lives isnt it? Dont worry a lot<--- I'll keep saying that until you dont, even if it took me forever.
You poured lots of emotions in this piece, great job:)

You have just reminded me of why I hate being a woman...emotional little worrier I am...ugh

Agree with Hellon, the use of marigold is just beautiful!!

sigh*...cant even comment, to relatable to break a part and try and see your side and analyze it. I read, I comprehend, I feel the same way...
loveeeelyyy

Andrea, still you write and still you be strong...you are wise one with so much to give, such is the emotion in this piece you express simply yet with great courage.

Love always, You are that marigold who'll keep on coming back and standing tall in the breeze of life

xx

I hope you don't mind but I nominated this for this week's poetry contest, wonderful poem, fantastic job

Personally i like the simplicity of this poem. It shows that through everything you persist and continue to worry about htose you love... Worrying about everything

Now how it ends in silence scares me, Think about it... It ends it silence usually means something permanent has happened like death or something else like that. Yeesh, and you say you dont write very emotional writes. How did I inspire you at all *shakes my head*

This also reminds me of when my friend attempted something and i worried about her all day long... Forever and ever and ever...
Its what people do, and trust me its more then just girls i know plenty of guys that worry.

Females express it better though >.> Hands down.

Thank you!

Edit: Just noticed the title. Ashes really does remind me of death... <3 Maybe someone was in trouble?