O'er Summer Skies (Huitain)

Hellon,

A nice piece about nature..this form is new to me, thanks for the info and for introducing it.
A perfect 8 syllables , the rhymes, and wordings are perfect too.

Well done. :)

Gel

Hellon, I thought I would look through some old pieces so here I am. This is a beautifully executed piece of nature. Though limited syllables and lines you keep the flow and rhyming perfect and smooth.

Take care, Em

"I don't recall seeing this form before, however the author makes it look so easy and effortless that it makes me want to attempt it myself.
I'm always a fan of beautiful imagery and within the opening lines the author has me smiling as I can quite easily see what she is describing in my mind, and it makes for such a pretty visual.

I'm usually not a fan of nature poems as I find that they are one of the more difficult genres to write about, and -if- a poet succeeds in writing them often I find they become cliche and often include overused terms/similes/metaphors etc. However, the author does a simply wonderful job throughout the whole poem, the imagery is spot on, as is the flow and the content of the poem, and I think this was a remarkable poem and lovely attempt at the style used."

;)

This poem is like a sunset view and the beautiful silence that follows. Truly a relaxing piece(:
Captivating!!

Lovely flow and imagery here. The form fits perfectly.

One of the things I really love about your poetry is the minimal use of punctuation. Sometimes I think I use too much, and they still don't flow the way I want them to, haha.

The delicate wording and rhymes, I enjoyed a lot too. This is something I could read over and over.
Glad to read from you again.