You took me on a trip of tears and landed me into sleep... WHAT?? This was wonderful to read... its deep and emotion with a twisty message... I flippin love this!

Chelsey, it is in this that I see things are not easy for you but I know you always get through it and here I felt for you because you battle so hard and life gets you down and this piece had emotion and truth and I felt it in every line but you express it wit creativity, you pen it with ease, you say there is no flow to your thoughts yet the piece was smooth and the little breaks in the storyline were there to reflect...to find the path you should tread.

I am in awe always not just of your talent but your heart, your strength, your beauty.

Love ya girl
xxx

I vandalize the brick wall that is built around
sleeping..

that one line is incredibly powerfull .!! it conjours up such images of how vunerable we feel when love is gone

This took me back to a place I didn't want to return to, but in a good way... If that makes sense..
Oddly enough, the pain and raw emotion makes this a beautiful, perfect poem. I'm still having trouble sleeping, and I read this at just the right time. Thank you for sharing.

- Liz

Wow, i really love this poem. It helps you know what you are going through in the poem and the reader can connect easily with what is going on.

A very powerfully written piece, Chelsey. Well done.