Bad habit

Best line at the end.the honesty;a bee line right to the heart of the matter.THAT'S the kind of thing that grabs my attention."how do i stop drinking?"BOOM!!... that's what i hear

I really do like how deep and truthful this is.
A couple of notes:
- habits is spelled with one B.
- be aware of how you end a stanza. It'll be what we remember most. So I suggest ending the first stanza with something other than "but when" because it strikes me as odd.
- show don't tell. I know we hear this a lot. But i think it would be a lot stronger if you don't tell us what the new bad habit that is picked up, is. Purpose talk about quenching your thirst.

On a side note, I'm saddened when I read this. So good job at conveying the emotion intended. C:

Wow what a nice poem. Sweet soliloquy.