A Dark Happily Ever After

by La Reina De Corazones   Dec 10, 2012


As the twenty-fourth hour struck,
A red river slowly emerged from it's shadows,
And two epic fights where fought upon that wretched hour,
One fight was won in sweet victory,
While the other was lost in bitter anguish,
Yet two souls had finally gotten their heart's desires,

Crimson marks covered a wedding dress,
The groom wondering around between a mix of a zombie and a lunatic,
And all he thought at that moment was,
"Where's my bride?!"

Rain was always a naughty child,
Taking countless lovers here and there,
Yet he never forgot one of his former brides,
The one that had his heart in her capable hands,
So as to keep her safe he erased any and all tracks of her...

i just want comments please the votes doesn't matter and this is in three parts!

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  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is dark and intense and shares so much of emotions and thoughts implicitly.
    This is definitely unique and I am waiting for the 3rd part.:)
    Keep writing. You write awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Brilliant!! 2nd live Drove my attention, especially "red river". Rest of the thoughts are so deep proving that this is written by expert. Thank you for sharing.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Ooh I love this! Very dark and captivating...I must read the second part!!!

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