Ooh I love this! Very dark and captivating...I must read the second part!!!

Brilliant!! 2nd live Drove my attention, especially "red river". Rest of the thoughts are so deep proving that this is written by expert. Thank you for sharing.

This is dark and intense and shares so much of emotions and thoughts implicitly.
This is definitely unique and I am waiting for the 3rd part.:)
Keep writing. You write awesome!

Very Nicely Done!!!