Wow, I really liked this, it is so incredible, I hope you never stop writing, you speak to so many people and you are sooo fantastic at what you do

I like this one too, although not quite as much as the first one for some reason. It's still very beautiful, but some of the imagery was repeated from the first...I'm definitely waiting for the third one though!

5/5

This is incredible. You write awesome. And I wish you keep writing(:
Amazing piece

Nice presented details! The last stanza is my favorite, especially its 2nd line, the "treasure box".
Nicely penned.

Great Job!!!