Beautiful imagery described here, I feel like it holds a personal meaning to you because it feels real in a sense, like powerful.

Congrats on the win too :)

Congrats on the win,

I like the peppermint kisses imagery.

Peppermint kisses

^^This part shows the taste of a lover's kiss
making the intro of this poem interesting..very
nice!

Kaleidoscope lights
flash inside azure eyes,

^^I like the image here for it shows the magic/lights from elsewhere reflecting in one's
lover's eyes...romantic!!

A sweet yet romantic write :)

Unique one Hannah and peppermint kisses itself spreads a fresh imagery.
And congrats on your win:)
Wonderful one^^

So much meaning....with so simple words:) I like it:)

Love this, it seems very holiday-ish in a totally non-cheesy way, which I liked. I loved stanzas equally but I sort of felt like they were two different pieces, just my opinion though!

5/5 Great job!

This is lovely, Hannah. I remember reading this, and I'm glad it won.

I really like "kaleidoscope lights" - it's such a nice way to write of christmas lights, or that's what I picture, at least.

"new passion simmers"

shows how the season really is magical. It brings people together, whether they've been apart or not, it brings them closer. It's really beautiful. Well done!

I like the dreamy way you included peppermint with kisses. It reminds me of a winter-wonder candy land! 5/5