Comments : Inconsolable (Senryu)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Meme- This poem is so true... but the tango stops when one stops dancing... my analysis.. Wow!

    Meme- You took the senryu form, and mixed a message that hits home.. makes you think.. and it is a message that sings truth.. love it!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Yup, thats the point Maple. It stops when one decides it should stop, but it continues to last only if they were two.

      And thanks a lot for the comment :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I've heard the saying "it takes two to tango" all my life... I love your addition to it. It is so true.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    A thoughtful piece and makes one to think! Your messages are deep whatever the size of the poem.
    Excellent piece(: