by Robert Dec 12, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Love I have, and lot's to share |
by Sylvia
Very nice but I am a very cynical person at my age and when someone says trust in me, I immediately go on guard and hold my feelings back in order not to be hurt. Regardless of my reaction and feelings, this is a nice write with good sentiments. Needs a little work on punctuation and the flow could be smoother with a few adjustments. Keep up the good work. |
by Meena Krish
Now this is s sign of a true gentleman with a heart to love and give...sweet and lovingly penned :) |