My Sun

by Robert Dec 12, 2012 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems

The pain I feel burn's my bones
To ashes my soul shall become
My heart shall change to solid stone
As I break to the heat of the sun

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11 years ago
by yogi73

I agree with the other reviews. wonderful word choice and your unique voice lends it self well to poetry.
11 years ago
by Dreamofolwin

A sad write, SO intense... and full of feeling! I loved it :)
Really Well Done :)
~ Olwin
11 years ago
by Meena Krish

Short yet they hold a depth full of emotions. Liked the rhyme and flow..good one!

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