Creepy! I love that you accidentally sent this to me! Its beyond awesome.....I hear whispers, I feel like falling, totally captivated here.

Your dark poems remind me a lot of your nature poems...the smallest details bring the most impact to the piece!

I drew a conclusion for this piece, well it just popped into my mind. After reading this I imagined a woman with a pale face, and black hair, hanged on a branch on a cliff, in a forest that has big trees in it.
This piece is really dark, and perfectly written as always^_^
Brilliant.

Fall - I shall
Ya but in my heart!!
That's stunning Andrea. I loved it.

Awesome piece!!
The darkness is strong and the imagery...plus the aspect of nature is pretty awesome too.

Xxxx

Tee Hee, I do love your dark poems. You rock at them and getting the power impact in them. The wow Factor!

acheing for the thrill
to let go,

- acheing = aching

I love this and the title of it too.

More dark poems please xxx