2 of my favorite forms have just come to life in this piece Khalid... BEAUTIFUL!

The kyrielle Sonnet is a difficult form to write.. I tell ya, you have a gift for formed poetry and it shines in this piece.. the message touches me.. sometimes thoughts can interact with feeling... and become a nu-sense to the soul... love this!

I very much enjoyed this piece, although I have to say the style is a little repetitive for me, but I do think you mastered it! Excellent job