O.O Woah....I like it. I give u 5/5 ma, but that is terrifyingly beautiful.

Wow, I really loved this, it has sooo much emotion and beautiful wording, fantastic poem

It was very deep. I did always love the darker tales of happily ever after.

"Rain Rain come again,
Take the tears and the pain away,
Let thy heart float upon that cloud,
That meets the Rain once again my love"

That's the most enticing part of the poem. I like it, especiallt the third line.

Congratulations for the 3rd part. It's totally heart taking and thought provoking.

Great piece!!!!

I'm so glad you wrote the third part, it definitely matched the eloquence of the first! I really enjoyed this, very dark and haunting (which are my favorite kinds of poems).

I see the first stanza was in quotations, what was that from??

So different and enticing! I loved the imagery and the thoughts and the narration:)
How unique is the idea of this poem and you crafted it so well.
Awesome(:

Aww! Cutie....i've been waiting for the completion of this wonderful piece of urs to read, rate and comment!
Divided into three lengthy parts, the emotions in the poem are enormous. I'm impressed by ur artful piece and eager to read more of yours!
Keep it up always! 1000/1000! Lol

Superb Ending, Wow!!!