I like the rhyming, the way that it just seems to flow, and I love that you put questions every other place in a poem it makes me love them and reading the poem since I love to ponder the questions it's life humanity often is curious I love the second stanza that cuts deep I used to be a cutter and it wasn't always fun and games I kept loosing myself and there was no hope for me the more I did it and the only way I got out was the death of someone close to my heart to snap me out., so now I'm different. Thank you for showing and posting this poem sorry I haven't posted faster but I have been busy with my school work 5/5

-Mori