Comments : Mother (Chained haikus)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Very interesting, almost seemed like a description of each aspect of the world. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice to see you are still so creative with your forms, nice string of haiku's here. I like how you describe mother nature and after all, she is only pleasant if we respect her and appreciate her instead of moaning about her flaws.