I can tell you so much about mother instinct
and we all have an Guardian Angel.
Certain Things happen for a reason and for some strange reason they remaina miracle
beautiful peace Hannah

Seems like your guardian angel protected you during an accident? Maybe I'm wrong :p and to have your mother as your guardian angel is double the blessing, no one protects like mother. :)
this is a beautiful write. I loved it.

-Liz

Hannah this is beautiful. <3

I gather I-65 to be the road? The image I get is of you being in an accident and being strapped into the trolley bed while they try to help you, all the while you are not seeing what is around you because you see this beautiful angel, your mother, who has came to guide you through this and pull you out the other end.

I loved your tone through out and although it was short it created a vivid scene for the reader.

I loved your ending:

Somewhere between home and I-65,
I found you again, Mother -
my guardian angel.

- I imagine this to be one of many times where she will protecting you and travelling along side you in all that you do.

Just beautiful xx

Wow, I'm surprised I've never read your work sooner, I really love your style. The meaning behind this piece is subtle yet clear which truly takes talent.

Hannah Nannah were you in an accident my love? How scary :/

I loved this poem, interesting topic to write about actually, not about your mother, but the accident...the sounds and the imagery here...scary...but awesome that your ok and even more awesome that you have an angel..they are precious, especially our family... loved this

Near death experiences are pretty frightening but at the same time, they make you think about life in a different way...
I cannot imagine how scary being in an accident like this is, but I know what it's like to be kept away from the light but a loved one already there, its a strange feeling, being so close the death, to heaven and wanting to be with the angels you miss but also knowing they'll be waiting when the time is right.

Keep writing such beautiful pieces, the emotion and the soul in this piece is so special, and the whole write was intriguing but inspiring.

all the best, Tara
x

Hannah, this piece touched me in so many ways.. To start, the message describes a tragic event on I-65, such as a car accident... the fear can be felt throughout this piece and it's so elegantly written, I automatically felt peace and comfort.

To have the presence of your mother there for you, the loving spirit, just left me speechless and tearful. The love of a mother is always present, and a true, comforting guardian angel. What a beautiful and creative, heartfelt piece this is... Very precious piece!

I love this <3 its so sad yet happy. it made me feel so good idk how to explain it . but it truly spoke to me . brilliant piece very emotional.

I love this...very sweet:) 5/5