Comments : Mouse and Rat [Diamante]

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What an interesting poem! The style is very interesting, simple but I love descriptive poems so I really enjoyed it. The subject you picked was unconventional too, and that's always refreshing

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Simple yet the form made this elegant. I love the simplicity in your poems always. And the beauty of forms are just impeccable for penning a fab poem:)