This ones really good, in some ways I like poems that are story like or something, like this one. Its somewhat refreshing, the style, anyways, as Ive said good, real good.

Okay this is VERY pretty and amazing to read my dear! and i go with Hallucinostic it is refreshing! :) but i think this poem/story is very beutiful my favorite part of this poem was
they both lay together in silence as the love fills the blood soaked bed. as they lay the walls sing a deathly lullaby of two tragic lovers locked apart

very good my dear!:) 5/5

Queen Ash