It's Like Your Heart You Are Trying To Hide

I knew someone like this. they were always silent and serious. I always tried to figure them out but i couldnt. this is really good because it shows a personality of someone without us knowing who that person is. it also shows that since they're are unique you end up being intrigued by them and end up falling for them.

I like the idea of this poem, and how it looks:)
I hope you to try the free verse poem, when you feel like writing, and try adding some punctuation.

I love your ideas for your poems, good job:)

Wonderful written and i like the title its completly different..

Very nice :)