This poem is very nicely written. You did really good in expressing your emotions here. The lenght is just right in my opinion, the choice of words, simple, which is what I prefer in poems. All in all very good.

Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it

Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it

Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it