I like your use of the ocean in this poem. The first line is very simple but very striking, very good choice in doing that. The ending is awesome, enough said bout that, just awesome. A great poem. |
by Tina
:) :) Thank you very much!!! |
Beautiful, and beautifully written, I really like how you express your heart in metaphors, describtions |
by Tina
:) Thanks to you :) :) |