Comments : Beyond A Storm

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I like your use of the ocean in this poem. The first line is very simple but very striking, very good choice in doing that. The ending is awesome, enough said bout that, just awesome. A great poem.

    • 11 years ago

      by Tina

      :) :) Thank you very much!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Beautiful, and beautifully written, I really like how you express your heart in metaphors, describtions

    • 11 years ago

      by Tina

      :) Thanks to you :) :)