Little Birdy

by ArtistrySoul   Dec 14, 2012


Lying in bed, not stressed
Closed eyelids to fall asleep,
but that's not how it seems
Tired of counting those sheep's
Cushioned hair gives you 1000 hugs
Night's bulb, fireflies and a snowy owl
stare to believe naturally beautiful
lives on earth

Never have nightmares,
If so, It's okay
Call on me, I'll send my flash-light
packing and sent on its way
Cold outside, rain and snow
Your tucked up inside,
a cocooned butterfly ready to meet the world

A made wish nursed under your rested pillow,
someday it comes true, very true
Good night to you too!!

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Good night to you too!!

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    On another comment:

    " If so, Its okay"

    ^^^ I think "its" should be it's.

    I couldn't spot anything else. I like the ending. I'm not a fan of counting sheep's. ( :D I think sheep is the plural of sheep )

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you!

      yeah your right 'it's' ...... hehe I don't think anyone likes counting sheep

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Wow it's soo sweet and well written really loved it .... it deserve a 5/5 for sure

    Cushioned hair gives you 1000 hugs
    Night's bulb, fireflies and a snowy owl
    stare to believe naturally beautiful
    lives on earth

    a great imagination ...loved the whole poem

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you very much!!

      hehe . .. . that is my favourite stanza as well, as the saying goes 'its a page turner' :P

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Aw...this is so sweet and heart touching, your words seem so sincere and warm which are key ingredients in a friendship. I find this piece to be heartwarming and I totally agree with the comment up above this poem is definitely a 5/5.

    Favorite stanza...

    Never have a nightmares,
    If so, its okay
    Call on me, I'll send my flash-light.
    packing and sent it on its way
    Cold outside, rain and snow
    you will be tucked up inside
    all nice and warm.

    Very sweet and heart touching write.

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you very much!!

      And acknowledging I should be a 5/5 makes it even more sentimental towards the poem =p

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I dont know why this is down rated, I so love it. Its so sincere and it shows how loyal to your friend.
    Great job:)

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank You WF!!! =]

      I'm really humbled you read my poem and more so embedding a commenting :P

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