Comments : The imperfect girl

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Okay, here's my thoughts on this.

    I'm not much on Dark Poetry, and I honestly think this one belongs under the Sad: depression category, but it was good. It shows what most girls go through because of what the media sees as beautiful, when in reality, all women are beautiful.

    Suggestion: this reads like a long paragraph, I'd tryy putting it into stanza's by two or three lines.

    Overall:
    this was a good read, I enjoyed it.
    4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    I really liked this piece as it talks on so many things and gives a deep insight.
    Keep penning:)