Comments : Gentle Annihilation

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Not bad at all for someone who " doesnt do love poems" lol

    I do love your love poems.

    " You reveal the scent, the sigh, the sacred footprints
    in the sky. I close my eyes and wish for a thousand
    nights with you..."

    - loveeee this part so much. it is amazing and it brought me to tears because I remember wishing this too when I was seperated from my soul mate and I just related to this so much.

    Thanks for sharing xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ugh....you know that with every syllable you wreck me don't you.......this time in two weeks.....i will paint your soul xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Let me have you-

    A bare symphony of every sense, we'll ride the
    amplitude of madness into morning...

    ^ I found this particular part exhilarating.